Greetings CiteHR,
This is Ravi. I am a new member.
Attached is my CV for the persual of all senior members. Kindly let me know if there are suitable opportunities for me either as a Recruiter or a HR Generalist.
Thanks and Best Regards,
Ravi.R
From United Kingdom
This is Ravi. I am a new member.
Attached is my CV for the persual of all senior members. Kindly let me know if there are suitable opportunities for me either as a Recruiter or a HR Generalist.
Thanks and Best Regards,
Ravi.R
From United Kingdom
Hi Ravi,
I have gone through your CV, a nice effort on your part. :arrow: You've some good engineering and HR qualifications as well as adequate work-related background. But if you really need an interview call from a mature organization, then this CV won't help you to get one...unless and until you give it a professional look.
Frankly speaking, your current CV didn't click me. There are several reasons, such as it's very long (4 pages), the objective is obscured, you must not include your college profile (sounds you are dong advertisement for them), professional experience doesn't explain your exact job title and on-job achievements, company information must not be mentioned in the CV, your professional qualification should not be included under the title of personal information, and finally your actitivities are wandering here and there...!
If you don't want all this to be noticed by any potential employer, then you must think to re-design your CV. If you need any further help, please do not hesitate to contact me. I shall be glad to guide you in preparing your CV, which I believe will take you to the interview table. :)
Sincerely,
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Adnan
From Pakistan, Karachi
30I have gone through your CV, a nice effort on your part. :arrow: You've some good engineering and HR qualifications as well as adequate work-related background. But if you really need an interview call from a mature organization, then this CV won't help you to get one...unless and until you give it a professional look.
Frankly speaking, your current CV didn't click me. There are several reasons, such as it's very long (4 pages), the objective is obscured, you must not include your college profile (sounds you are dong advertisement for them), professional experience doesn't explain your exact job title and on-job achievements, company information must not be mentioned in the CV, your professional qualification should not be included under the title of personal information, and finally your actitivities are wandering here and there...!
If you don't want all this to be noticed by any potential employer, then you must think to re-design your CV. If you need any further help, please do not hesitate to contact me. I shall be glad to guide you in preparing your CV, which I believe will take you to the interview table. :)
Sincerely,
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Adnan
From Pakistan, Karachi
Dear Adnan, Thanks a ton for your frank feedback :D I would sincerely appreciate if you could share some hints to improve my CV. Thanks and Best Regards, Ravi.R
From United Kingdom
From United Kingdom
Hi Ravi,
Thanks for realizing my points, and hope I wasn't harsh in my comments :). Anyway, if you can PM me and send your primary email ID then I would be glad to forward you an excellent document on how to write your CV and get an interview call. Further, you can also find some important information by visiting the <link outdated-removed> ( Search On Cite | Search On Google ) and <link outdated-removed> ( Search On Cite | Search On Google ) section.
Sincerely,
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Adnan
From Pakistan, Karachi
Thanks for realizing my points, and hope I wasn't harsh in my comments :). Anyway, if you can PM me and send your primary email ID then I would be glad to forward you an excellent document on how to write your CV and get an interview call. Further, you can also find some important information by visiting the <link outdated-removed> ( Search On Cite | Search On Google ) and <link outdated-removed> ( Search On Cite | Search On Google ) section.
Sincerely,
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Adnan
From Pakistan, Karachi
Hello Ravi,
Thanks for your PM! I have inserted some websites from where you can get useful resume tip:
Quintessential Careers-Resume and Cover Letter Service
Resume Writing Services
WetFeet-Resumes Articles <link updated to site home> ( Search On Cite | Search On Google )
The Riley Guide-Resumes & Cover Letters
JobWeb.com - Career development and Job-search advice
CareerBuilder India - The largest job search, employment & careers Site
Browse these links and read the material thoroughly, then choose any suitable format from these websites and edit your resume accordingly. Pass it on to Amit (eafil) and me as well, and then we'll give you our suggestions. Today I'll also forward you a few sample resumes at your given email ID, which will give you an idea to prepare your CV. Thanks for your paitience, and good luck for the future.
Sincerely,
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Adnan
From Pakistan, Karachi
Thanks for your PM! I have inserted some websites from where you can get useful resume tip:
Quintessential Careers-Resume and Cover Letter Service
Resume Writing Services
WetFeet-Resumes Articles <link updated to site home> ( Search On Cite | Search On Google )
The Riley Guide-Resumes & Cover Letters
JobWeb.com - Career development and Job-search advice
CareerBuilder India - The largest job search, employment & careers Site
Browse these links and read the material thoroughly, then choose any suitable format from these websites and edit your resume accordingly. Pass it on to Amit (eafil) and me as well, and then we'll give you our suggestions. Today I'll also forward you a few sample resumes at your given email ID, which will give you an idea to prepare your CV. Thanks for your paitience, and good luck for the future.
Sincerely,
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Adnan
From Pakistan, Karachi
Dear Ravi,
I have attached a revised version of your CV. You can call it a friendly draft that's created by me, because I have devoted 350 minutes in editing your CV <image no longer exists> . I hope, after comparing it with the OLD one, this NEW CV will give you some idea/insight of how a professional CV should look like.
Please remember that there are different ways to prepare a professional style CV, so I'm not claiming it to be the final. Feel free to add or substract any detail according to your requirements. If you need anything else to discuss, please do not hesitate to contact me. I Wish you a very good luck, and looking forward to hearing from you.
With compliments,
Always friendly,
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Adnan
From Pakistan, Karachi
I have attached a revised version of your CV. You can call it a friendly draft that's created by me, because I have devoted 350 minutes in editing your CV <image no longer exists> . I hope, after comparing it with the OLD one, this NEW CV will give you some idea/insight of how a professional CV should look like.
Please remember that there are different ways to prepare a professional style CV, so I'm not claiming it to be the final. Feel free to add or substract any detail according to your requirements. If you need anything else to discuss, please do not hesitate to contact me. I Wish you a very good luck, and looking forward to hearing from you.
With compliments,
Always friendly,
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Adnan
From Pakistan, Karachi
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